I LOVE the changes you have made! This is really working nicely.
One comment: At the moment when he takes the violin out of his (pocket?) you may want to cut closer and closer between him and the fairy who is about to shoot him? Or perhaps take out the last cut of the fairy? It just needs a little re-working.
Will the final dance sequence be as elaborate as the fairy dancing? I think it would be great!
You don't know me and I don't know you but I randomly found your blog. I watched your animation and thought it was quite good! That's all I wanted to say. Keep up the good work!
This blog is dedicated to my senior thesis at USC. It's a three minute animated film about a farmer guy who's herding his cows through the woods when he stumbles across a faerie party. And while faeries are crazy partiers, they are none too inviting.
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Wow, Emily-
I LOVE the changes you have made! This is really working nicely.
One comment: At the moment when he takes the violin out of his (pocket?) you may want to cut closer and closer between him and the fairy who is about to shoot him? Or perhaps take out the last cut of the fairy? It just needs a little re-working.
Will the final dance sequence be as elaborate as the fairy dancing? I think it would be great!
Congratulations- great work!!!
I think the moment when he breaks the bench and everything stops could (and should) be a lot more momentous.
Like when Obi Wan Kenobi cuts that horse-faced looking dude's arm off in the Mos Eisley Cantina.
Only here, they don't just shrug it off. They pull their blasters out and get ready to tussle.
And of course, to quote the immortal words of Jennifer Lopez:
"You wanted to tussle? We tussled."
You don't know me and I don't know you but I randomly found your blog. I watched your animation and thought it was quite good! That's all I wanted to say. Keep up the good work!
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